A few friends looked at my work so far and suggested that I position my text more equally and to add more colour. I added text below the smaller images to advertise the magazine's website, this encourages the audience to interact and get involved which is suitable due to the age demographic who frequently use technology on a daily basis stereotypically. This persuades readers to look at a particular media format on a more modern, advanced platform. The use of convergent media further promotes the artist whilst giving fans the opportunity to find out more about her.
After further feedback I tried to improve my DPS, I feel that the second attempt is far more successful as the images are now more varied (and larger). I decreased the size of the left hand picture so it appeared to be more in proportion with the other page. Also small details such as the 'R' and the masthead in the top right hand corner now look more inconspicuous thus more natural.
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